Anneliese’s Reviews > Demon's Blood: The World of the Demonkin > Status Update
Anneliese
is 35% done
This book is not for readers that: like slow-burn or thoroughly developed motivations before action starts cranking. Sadly, this is reading a bit like a new FX teen vampire drama tv show on Monday nights....
— Oct 26, 2026 08:44PM
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Anneliese
is 3% done
This prologue is a case study of telling not showing. Very clunky start :(
— Oct 25, 2026 07:57PM
Anneliese
is on page 3
oh no. Immediately noticing issues in sentence structure - there are way too many commas...
— Oct 25, 2026 07:51PM