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SUMMARY: To sum up this whole book since I finished it! David's brother has a sketch book where he keeps all the rules for David. He's teaching him these rules, so one day he will wake up a regular brother. Then, he'll know how the world works, and his brother won't have to keep explaining things. Now, David knows all the rules and is prepared for the real world since his brother taught him well.
— Oct 27, 2026 01:46PM
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Eve Ritcheske
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CONFLICT: One of the conflicts of my book that just happened in the recent chapter was charter v society.David's brother gave David a society test to see how he would react in the real world,lets just say it did not end well.David's test was to follow the rules he learned in the public bathroom.Everything was going well until he decided to crawl under the stall because it was locked&he ended up walking in on someone.
— Oct 19, 2026 12:13PM
Eve Ritcheske
is on page 80 of 208
PREDICTIONS:David is trying to learn all of the rules his brother is giving him & his goal is to learn all the rules and follow them.His brother just gave him a new rule to learn which is no toys in the fish tank.Then,David was playing with his toys and accidentally dropped a barbie in the fish tank! When his brother found out he was furious.Now I'm predicting that David is going to get his first punishment.
— Oct 12, 2026 12:11PM
Eve Ritcheske
is on page 20 of 208
POINT OF VIEW:The point of view of my story is 3rd person.It was a little hard to figure out if it was a 3rd or 1st person but then I found a quote where i instantly knew it was 3rd person.Right when you open the book it says Rules for David,now the main character in the book is David so that already told me that someone else is narrating the book.Then I found "Come on David & "David" a lot so I knew its 3rd person.
— Oct 05, 2026 12:12PM