Ascolta’s Reviews > Thistlemarsh > Status Update

Ah, a DNF at 98%. Classic.

That feeling when jumping s/thing like 8 chapters ahead to the 95% point, and yet the pacing and story are as annoying as ever.

strangely, it took me until this point to realize that there's not a single robust female character in this entire book. B/c I was FForwarding since the 40% mark?

40%: More or less where I started skipping liberally ahead. Curious to know the outcome, but struggling to bear the blow-by-blow account.

Oh dear. This was humming along so well, then suddenly we get this annoying sloppy narrative line. Author deliberately mucking up the pace for ??? reasons ???

little prediction: hated uncle set up the 'provisions' in order to goad Mouse into staying