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is 85% done
Missed opportunities in the overall story. More needed to happen throughout the arch of the four books. Not all shoved into the last quarter of book 4. And what’s funny is that the first 3 books were good! Not boring or too slow. Lively world/character building. But the build up doesn’t feel earned…
— Nov 02, 2026 09:48AM

