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The way everything is just falling into her lap is comical

“I bet the pope in Rome just shat himself.”


Very unnecessary comment and so much empty conversation. It really is obvious a white woman wrote this

Actually what the fuck is happening, why are we even on a side quest right now when the main plot is happening elsewhere? Couldn't she have found out about Raksh another time? And amina is quite irritating for a supposed older lady pirate, she's acting like a damn child

What kind of bullshit is this......it's laughable

“I’m a pirate, not an idiot knight.”

ugh the dialogue sounds so stupid. it's a fantasy book about a formidable pirate, why does her responses look like something I'd find in a YA Fantasy?

One more thing, what kind of sumatran man is named Tiny? I feel like this is just a joke. Like the author is just throwing out names that they like

So many Nakhudas and Marawatis. Couldn't the author just write ship? You don't have to mention the name of the shit every two seconds omg

So much trouble over Asif's daughter

I have some thoughts but I'll finish this book first before I voice them.

Things are finally heating up