Victorias' KeepinitReal’s Reviews > Breathless > Status Update

Ok..I'm only at the 20% mark and I'm noticing a habit with the author's writing style that is annoying me. I don't know how much longer I'll be able to continue reading. The author has a habit of writing, "He says" or "I say" or "I ask", after almost every response between each character. I was hoping it would stop but unfortunately it has not and it's taking away from the dialogue. Ugh. Not sure if I can continue.