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Some Girl reflects AB's affinity for seamlessly sketching out the dregs of society. Descriptive prose reflects disease laden, drug soaked, and dead ridden backdrop of the 'hood, decayed buildings and forsaken pilgrims. Juvie bros X and Nine sticking with weed when "X" picks up a hooker, brings her back to their place. Utterly disgusting, shocking horror tale peppered with levity and roomie "Nine" a hoot.
— Oct 28, 2026 07:22PM
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THE PROCUREMENT OF PURITY is the story of Gwen who was tossed aside by her lover after surrendering her virginity some seven years in the past. She is new and improved like fresh off the assembly line, still untouched by another man, and she is meeting Roberto again to seduce him and win back his devotion. Believe that? Rated 5 Stars. AB had me going in circles trying to figure out what the "H" was going on.
— Oct 29, 2026 06:23PM
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ROTTEN EGGS was the third story about two sick cohorts who "celebrate" Halloween with darkness and depravity hoping to snag Satan's attention. I learned by page 3 that Michigan has a 50-year history of folks committing crimes ranging from criminal mischief to overt violence and arson (even murder) in observance of what they perceive as a "dark" holiday. DNF' d when the pair grabbed a black cat.
— Oct 29, 2026 04:51PM
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Population Control is about the life and times of Ness, a male specimen who pollutes the Earth and is not a card carrying member of the human race. He is concerned about finding his next fix and answers an ad for a "get money quick scheme". I liked the author's colorful, albeit puke-inducing narrative laced with his trademark irony, black humor, and taste for the dark side. Enjoyed this story quite a bit.
— Oct 27, 2026 09:42PM
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Baptism is the first story in this collection fittingly titled Dark Assembly . A pregnant woman is informed that her fetus is devoid of life and deformed due to Panou's Syndrome. The,genetic chromosomal disease caused deformed skeletal tissue and inability to sustain life. Her baby Abigail is sadly and factually a deformed dead fetus. A chilling tale of denial and the dangers of irrational hope.
— Oct 26, 2026 09:06PM