Jacob P’s Reviews > The Tomorrow Code > Status Update

I wanna know more about Dr green

I have a trio concept: tane, Rebecca, and "fatboy"

3 pages, sorry needed to do work

I read 6 pages

I read 14 pages

I read 7 pages today

9

I find the changes in scenery interesting because it doesn't take place in just 3 areas it travels in multiple like tanes house, Rebecca's house, the new house the island, the town, the mall, the army base, etc, it has variety

don't trust the United states government

the dialogue is meant for dramatic effect but seems reasonable for the circumstances, the pacing can be confusing though