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novelfaerie
is 3% done
WHAT THE ACTUAL. Chapter 3 was quite random and not at all enjoyable.
— 8 hours, 48 min ago
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novelfaerie
is 51% done
This book suffers from the same unpleasant superficiality that was introduced in book 3. I fear that the very heavy themes introduced have been given very little tooth to them. Everything is very over explained, making the feeling, the connection, nonexistent. I’m very concerned about the second half 😥
— 5 hours, 1 min ago