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why is Hollyleaf pissed that Firestar didn't talk about Ashfur at the Gathering, anyway? girl...I'm trying, babes, but you're making it difficult

ok Ferncloud was literally Ashfur's sister, and she's with the Gathering group that found his body, and there's ABSOLUTELY NO reaction from her? about finding her brother's corpse in a stream? none at all?

"I deserve to [be one of the three]!...I'd work harder than any cat to be a great leader, and leave my paw print on all the Clans. I can't let Ashfur destroy all my plans."
oh girl, that's not-
listen, I understand Hollyleaf's wanting to be special, but she wants it for selfish reasons. "on all the Clans"? girl? you'd be leader of one, never having anything to do w/ the others; THAT'S NOT PART OF THE CODE, ma'am

yeah why exactly did she tell Ashfur, again? did she deadass think that he would keep that secret? seriously?

I FORGOT THAT! I forgot that Ashfur was the one who told Firestar to go down to the lake and be trapped by Hawkfrost using the fox trap

I don’t think Ashfur was mad at Brambleclaw. I think he was mad at Squirrelflight for biting his head off for no reason. Like girl we get it, you’re pissed that you can’t do warrior duties, but Ashfur was one of the only cats that wasn’t saying anything bad about Brambleclaw in that moment

BRO STFU LIONBLAZE AND GO GET THE DAMN HERBS TO LITERALLY SAVE YOUR CLANMATES
why tf hasn't Jaypaw told Leafpool about the vision? that's literally part of his fcking job as medicine cat, and that would definitely help matters

I'm sorry, but if Jaypaw had a LITERAL VISION FROM STARCLAN TELLING HIM WHERE TO FIND THE CATMINT, why hasn't he told Leafpool yet? That might definitely get her to let him go get some

""My name is Blackstar.""
PERIOOOODDDDDD