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The plot holes resulting from the time-travel angle are becoming too numerous to avoid.
Also, the treatment of madness seems to be a bit childish, especially so when dealing with Moore's real-life muses.
— Oct 31, 2026 10:14AM
Also, the treatment of madness seems to be a bit childish, especially so when dealing with Moore's real-life muses.
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Sylvan
is on page 757 of 1266
I'm so glad that part two is over. Hopefully part three returns to the vignette structure of the first part, which is much less frustrating.
— Nov 01, 2026 04:58PM
Sylvan
is on page 639 of 1266
I'm growing very tired of exposition awkwardly brought about through the dialogue of children. Moore very clearly wants his reader to know every little detail of the world he has created, but doesn't know how to bring it about naturally, which makes for an exhausting read. The overwhelming detail is also exhaustive, yet rarely illuminating. What Moore needs is a good, thorough editor.
— Oct 30, 2026 12:45PM