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Ava
is on page 186 of 531
Honestly this is such a lazy story... Took an History book and gave magical powers to a few people and made a book out of it. Feels reductive as a french person reading about the french revolution being reduced to some people with magic fighting one another in the streets of Paris. Like dude ? hope the book gets better or finds a way not to remain so boring and finds its way out of an History we know well
— Nov 03, 2026 02:48AM
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Ava
is on page 350 of 531
At this point I'm just annoyed... If the author had changed the countries names and the people's name, this book could be good. But because it's so close to the real thing, I keep wondering : if I remove the magic, is the story holding ? And yes. The answer is yes. The story is almost exactly what happened in France's history at the time.
That's lazy writing.
— Nov 04, 2026 12:42AM
That's lazy writing.