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that was a LONG sentence, almost the length of a paragraph - but a beautiful one nonetheless
— 6 hours, 21 min ago
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Esi
is on page 366 of 472
okay i think here finally the introspective voice works soo well. or maybe im just used to the writing style? either way good way to show her horror at finding him attractive lol
— 6 hours, 8 min ago
Esi
is on page 280 of 472
she would kill me herself and that made her the most genuine person in the room” 🥹
— 6 hours, 35 min ago
Esi
is on page 247 of 472
i like sevraim but i feel his characterisation could be a lot stronger or what makes him different from any of the other characters speaking?? he has interesting traits / (typical jester sidekick archetype) so he would speak more casually to alaric, not just sit more casually around him for example. he could literally be anyone speaking as everyone seems to have a similar voice
— 6 hours, 35 min ago
Esi
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i like the grandma, she reminds me of the matriarchs in game of thrones
— 6 hours, 37 min ago