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muffin
is 22% done
the huge plot hole lingering is annoying but oh well... pray tell how were you going to australia for a summer holiday when it's winter????
— Nov 04, 2026 07:44AM
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muffin
is 82% done
the plot that was barely there just few out of the window. I swear I could forgive the holes in the plot, I got genuinely interested in how this turns out but then it just fell apart. come on book, save yourself, you have like 30 pages for it 😭
— Nov 04, 2026 02:52PM