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Grimalka by Emily Marie (me)
Legit got very little editing done today, but I did edit one of my favorite scenes, which consists of Calliope kicking Fallon where the sun don't shine and then Fallon subsequently rage-baiting her after she apologizes
— Nov 05, 2026 05:45PM
Legit got very little editing done today, but I did edit one of my favorite scenes, which consists of Calliope kicking Fallon where the sun don't shine and then Fallon subsequently rage-baiting her after she apologizes
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Chapter Nine is honestly one of the hardest chapters to write due to how heavy it is. At least I get to edit Fallon and Calliope's first meeting after it, which is like a breath of fresh air after the absolute darkness of the previous chapter
— Nov 03, 2026 06:04PM
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Hello, angel of death.
This is not an angel of death that stares at me, dressed in pink finery. Yes, the title still holds true, but rather than masquerading as my true self, I hide my hideous truth under the guise of love and affection. Pink perfection masking the bloody, gruesome horrors beneath.
All right, who snuck into my google docs, cuz no way I wrote that
— Nov 02, 2026 06:47PM
This is not an angel of death that stares at me, dressed in pink finery. Yes, the title still holds true, but rather than masquerading as my true self, I hide my hideous truth under the guise of love and affection. Pink perfection masking the bloody, gruesome horrors beneath.
All right, who snuck into my google docs, cuz no way I wrote that
emily marie ₊°｡❆ (Jesus is King) [♡ my bf's vrs ♡]
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I'm going to try and average a chapter per day, and I have forty more chapters to edit, so, hypothetically, I should have it done a few weeks before Christmas
— Nov 02, 2026 04:35AM
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"I ship them so hard I'm giggling so much" I say like a crazy person like I didn't WRITE this couple that isn't a couple yet
The very specific scene that made me giggle is in comments if you're interested lol
— Nov 01, 2026 01:11PM
The very specific scene that made me giggle is in comments if you're interested lol
emily marie ₊°｡❆ (Jesus is King) [♡ my bf's vrs ♡]
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YES I finally finished chapter 6! It only took me two weeks
— Oct 31, 2026 07:55PM
emily marie ₊°｡❆ (Jesus is King) [♡ my bf's vrs ♡]
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You know you're exhausted when you write "thuddering in my chest" instead of "thudding in my chest" but you also wanted to write "thunder" in the next sentence so you wrote "thuder"
I need to go to bed (I say as I continue to edit)
— Oct 31, 2026 07:19PM
I need to go to bed (I say as I continue to edit)
emily marie ₊°｡❆ (Jesus is King) [♡ my bf's vrs ♡]
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I've had like five headaches already the editing is not editing it feels like I'm walking through tar...
— Oct 25, 2026 01:21PM
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They say a father is a daughter's first love, but Bryony never knew her father. All she had was Fallon. So her big brother was her first love. I love writing families
— Oct 23, 2026 07:15PM
emily marie ₊°｡❆ (Jesus is King) [♡ my bf's vrs ♡]
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Just finished editing an execution scene and now I think I need to go touch grass...because that was a little dark
At least Grimalka is living up to its genre. I was afraid it wasn't dark enough to be considered "dark fantasy" but I think it fits the bill save for the fact that my mc isn't morally gray
— Oct 21, 2026 04:52PM
At least Grimalka is living up to its genre. I was afraid it wasn't dark enough to be considered "dark fantasy" but I think it fits the bill save for the fact that my mc isn't morally gray
emily marie ₊°｡❆ (Jesus is King) [♡ my bf's vrs ♡]
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"[I]t is far easier to place the blame on the face, or lack thereof, present, rather than the one pulling the strings. Everyone will point their fingers at the puppet, but forget about the puppeteer. If his face is not seen, he will not be imprinted into the memory of the one taking their brethren's lives."
— Oct 20, 2026 04:52AM
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STOP! That was my fav scene that you’ve fed us, and you managed to make it BETTER?!? 🤭🤭🤭
Katniss (‘til You lit a fire in my soul) wrote: "STOP! That was my fav scene that you’ve fed us, and you managed to make it BETTER?!? 🤭🤭🤭"The power of editing 💪🏻😏
Straightening, but still moving tenderly, I grimace at her. “It sounds like that is the very first time you have ever said those words. Say it again, I don’t quite believe you.”
“I’ll kick you in less pleasant places if you make a mockery of my apology.”
“Less pleasant?” I laugh gutturally. “Lassie, I’m afraid you are unfamiliar with male anatomy, because there is no less pleasant place to hit than down there.”