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Chapter 2, aka the Worldbuilding Walk. I have realized what I call "shallow" about the writing is that it is so direct in telling you what you are supposed to feel. The descriptions of things, the inner thinking, conversation. Everything is just feel this, feel that. This is a caricature of fantasy things, etc.

In Chapter 2, we have the most blunt transition to direct worldbuilding. The subtlety and depth of a puddle after it rains.