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Moone
is on page 56 of 280
The way David plays the deservability game is so relatable. The way he makes his own hurt proof that he's wrong. The last sentence frames Iris as good for him but I just can't see it. I get a bad vibe. I feel bad for David, he's still so confused, reserved, and wanting. There was no big climax, it's like a snapshot from his life, anything could happen next. Maybe that's nice, an unfinished feeling
— Nov 08, 2026 04:03AM
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Moone
is on page 71 of 280
Yo ion get this one. I mean, in part, but it's also kinda odd. Don't know what the weird age play had to do with anything, I don't know why the pussy was smelly. So many bits here just felt odd. I understood what I thought was the MAIN idea, but this was the weakest story so far
— 10 hours, 47 min ago
Moone
is on page 35 of 280
Such a sweet first story, and a little gut punch near the end. I get it
— Nov 06, 2026 10:53PM
Moone
is 2% done
New book BB! I liked Addie Larue, but I it also stunted my reading in that it took me multiple months to finish it because I just couldn't find the time. Maybe a new book will help with that, one could hope!
— Nov 06, 2026 07:15AM