Rachel Lynn’s Reviews > Dawn of the Firebird > Status Update

It’s trying to do too much in one novel, so the story and emotions become shallow as a result. I don’t believe Khamilla’s loyalty or motivations because we never see her develop them, especially with her Imperial family. I think the story would have worked much better as a duology

The physical healing and stress she is put under is not convincing. She is constantly breaking bones and then continuing to train