Cozen’s Reviews > The Harlequin Doll > Status Update

"He had a small vanity stand set up just beside the front door to his mobile home, where he kept his can of glitter spray, his bottle of lotion and his comb-with his silver slacks on already, he had his entire costume within reach."

See not manliness at all.

Also, some times it seems this author tries too hard to string words together.

And could these guys (can't figure out which is the current leading man in this story) be anyless manly. Spandex reflective pants? I getthe they're a part of the circus but their behavior not helping any with their manliness either. Fake mustaches?

And now there's borderline cheating here. The actions sequences are off and I don't know how many more lines of " something gleaming off of skin" I can take.