Naomi > Status Update

Naomi is on page 88 of 216

This "Behind the Blindfold" story is a perfect example of why some erotica bores the fuck out of me. There is NO story! We know nothing about the characters. It's just a long, clinical detailing of sex after a brief description of the room. WTF?

— Jul 18, 2017 02:10PM

Like flag

Naomi’s Previous Updates

Naomi is on page 94 of 216

I've seen geriatric cancer patient porn done before, and done much better than here.

— Jul 18, 2017 07:54PM

Naomi is on page 71 of 216

One problem I have with a lot of these erotica stories is the woman soaking her panties at "hello." Yeah, sometimes that happens, but I DON'T want to read about it. It's lazy writing. There needs to be characterization, and their partners need to put in work to seduce them, verbally or physically.

— Jul 14, 2017 06:41PM

Naomi is on page 71 of 216

The story "Exhibition" was really nice. Hopefully there's more like that.

— Jul 13, 2017 07:47PM

Naomi is on page 53 of 216

A nice little vampire story. That was unexpected but appreciated all the same.

— Jul 13, 2017 06:54PM

Naomi is on page 39 of 216

So far none of these stories are sexy. In fact, they're gross.

— Jul 13, 2017 05:53PM

Naomi is on page 16 of 216

This story "Just Knowing" has the most cliche dialogue I've ever read. Two exes arguing, using every phrase you would expect them to.