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Elithanathile
Elithanathile is 70% done
// This is deteriorating for me :-(!! Book, please buck up!!
Aug 01, 2017 06:13PM
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Elithanathile
Elithanathile is finished
// Hmmm ... while the HEA was definitely that, I would have liked a much more solid ending ...
I mean, it was SOLID, but I would have liked way more finality, way more direction. Anyone reading this bundle will know what I mean :-)!!
Aug 01, 2017 11:21PM
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Elithanathile
Elithanathile is 95% done
// "I love you. I may not be the kind of guy who remembers to say it as often as I should; but every time you touch this collar, every time it moves against your skin or you feel its weight around your neck, that’s what it means."

~ Yayyyyyyyyy :-) FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!
Aug 01, 2017 10:41PM
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Elithanathile
Elithanathile is 92% done
// Joe, so internally, you admitted you're deeply, madly, passionately, in love with Scott! Scott told you he loves you, repeatedly. You KNOW you love HIM, and he knows it too ... but he hasn't heard you say it. TELL HIM!! TELL HIM YOU LOVE HIM, DAMMIT!!!!! Don't you get shy on us now!!
Aug 01, 2017 09:55PM
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Elithanathile
Elithanathile is 86% done
// I adore how the author, without saying much, through Joe's introspection, shows that it's Scott (as the sub) that holds the majority of the power :-)!!
Aug 01, 2017 08:55PM
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Elithanathile
Elithanathile is 82% done
// Not to nitpick, but something I've noticed throughout this bundle of novellas, is the fact that editing missed one crucial detail: capitalizing the word Dom. Yes, sub should be lowercase, but Dom should be capitalized. At least that's what I've learned ... it makes complete sense though!!
Aug 01, 2017 08:10PM
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Elithanathile
Elithanathile is 79% done
// NO, don't jump to the wrong conclusions. It is NOT because of too much romance, it's because of TOO LITTLE communication >:-/!!
Aug 01, 2017 07:31PM
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Elithanathile
Elithanathile is 78% done
// He loves you JUST as much as you love him, Scott :-)! Take the leap!!
Aug 01, 2017 07:20PM
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Elithanathile
Elithanathile is 78% done
// Awwwwww my chest hurts for these two :-/!!
Aug 01, 2017 07:19PM
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Elithanathile
Elithanathile is 76% done
// Rawr!! That was hot :-)! Very very HOT!! Also, now we're getting MCs addressing their feelings :-) ... even yummier :-)!!
Aug 01, 2017 06:59PM
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Elithanathile
Elithanathile is 72% done
// "Scott gave a jerky nod. “Yes, I’ve th-th-thought about it.”
Something inside Joe relaxed. He wasn’t pushing Scott into doing something he didn’t want to do after all. Scott wanted to screw him, and Joe had never imagined he could be so thoroughly overjoyed by finding out a guy wanted to top him."

~ <333333333333333!!
Aug 01, 2017 06:30PM
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