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Louise M Sanderson
is 77% done
Hm. So? Not good. Not boring because the narration is good. But the plot is bad. Shallow. Things got from OMG DRAMATIC to chillin' cool in seconds, the top goes along because... Because that's what the plot needs, basically. People solve animosities because, yeah, that's gotta happen too.
But nothing is developed. We're told things happened and that things are cool and deep and ok now. But that doesn't make it real.
— Aug 14, 2017 03:47PM
But nothing is developed. We're told things happened and that things are cool and deep and ok now. But that doesn't make it real.
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Louise M Sanderson
is 78% done
I still can't believe we got cheated out of the firsts in Austin's life, romantically and with his friends, and everything. Nothing matters now. :/
— Aug 14, 2017 03:49PM
Louise M Sanderson
is 37% done
The pacing has been great. The narration is super entertaining and believable. The escalading of things is really smooth. So far, I'm liking it a lot.
— Aug 13, 2017 08:05PM
