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Terri
is 70% done
Your husband is the most well known mage in the WORLD and you haven't asked a single Castivarian if they know where he is. It's actually starting to make me mad because it's sloppy writing. Ignore the problem and hope the reader doesn't notice? Ugh.
— Sep 08, 2017 06:43PM
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Terri
is 70% done
Your husband is the most well known mage in the WORLD and you haven't asked a single Castivarian if they know where he is. It's actually starting to make me mad because it's sloppy writing. Ignore the problem and hope the reader doesn't notice? Ugh.
— Sep 08, 2017 06:43PM
Terri
is 66% done
This is definitely some second book syndrome, but I wouldn't mind it so much if my ship hadn't gotten separated. I'm usually in a story for the ship and Sesskia isn't even looking for Cederic. I just don't buy that she wouldn't be looking for him.
— Sep 08, 2017 06:33PM
Terri
is 40% done
I know she's the "wandering" mage in this one but I'd really rather she wander back to Cederic. TRAVELOGUE FANTASY UGH.
— Sep 04, 2017 08:05AM
