Kim’s Reviews > Confessions of a Teenage Hermaphrodite > Status Update

This is confusing, particularly with random time-jumps. The 1st-person POV isn't working; some of the time when (I think) we're in the character's college-aged head, the thought and speech styles read more like young children's, and sometimes in the character's head as a child, the vocabulary is too adult - not to mention that the character seems to have 3 personalities. I don't feel up for trying to navigate it all.