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DNF. I found the writing to be a little annoying. Sunshine can be talking about the Con, and then three sentences later she’s talking about something irrelevant like that one time she went to the doctor’s as a kid. (An example) The story could have been told in 200 pages had this not been an issue.
Sep 28, 2017 02:33PM
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