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Titivating? Is that a word?

"There were a whole gaggle of eager bachelorettes..."

There WAS a whole gaggle ...

"...all the more so now she'd seeing him in the flesh."

All the more so now SHE'S seeing him ... ?

Alas, you get what you pay for, and this was free. 😊

Kissing?

Haven't we learned from "Pretty Woman" that kissing was a no-no? Or was that just the character's rule?

"He walked over and handed her Emma."

I think that should have been "He walked over and handed Emma her brandy."

Who proofread this?