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Pavellit is 48% done
I couldn't feel the reasoning behind the two MC's change from two straight guys to gay lovers. Their personal tragedies were explained but I really didn't get completely how this drove them to find each other. It seemed so unexpected, almost magical, without enough buildup. Anyway, there is still enough length to prove me wrong. I'm hoping for better!
Oct 10, 2017 11:22PM
The Rebuilding Year (The Rebuilding Year, #1)

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