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Sharil
is on page 125 of 270
Story and action is a bit fantastical. Entertaining.
Inconsistency in the writing, especially conversation vacillating between Scottish vernacular and highly sophisticated English sentences.
English majors should avoid this author. The author's writing style is highly choppy at times. Clearly the book lacked an editor and proofreaders. Errors in word usage/spelling such as the use of to/too detract from flow.
— Oct 28, 2017 03:23AM
Inconsistency in the writing, especially conversation vacillating between Scottish vernacular and highly sophisticated English sentences.
English majors should avoid this author. The author's writing style is highly choppy at times. Clearly the book lacked an editor and proofreaders. Errors in word usage/spelling such as the use of to/too detract from flow.
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Sharil
is on page 219 of 270
I am still distracted by the characters' highly sophisticated thoughts that don't mesh with their probable education and the time period of writing. Inconsistent use of vernacular. Poor use of punctuation leaves me stumbling and re-reading at times. The story lacks appropriate detail of true warriors maintaining their skills/strength, as well as continuity. Minor characters are mentioned, forgotten and resurrected.
— Oct 29, 2017 03:10AM
