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Sandy Frediani
is 65% done
This is getting ridiculous. Quoting -
"The vamp had tied her wrists tied over her head to a beam, wire biting into the tender skin."
"The [vamp's] other arm pinned her left hand to her waist, locking her in place."
If her hands are tied over her head, how is the vamp pinning one to her waist? Once again, the author has lost her place.
— Oct 28, 2017 03:28PM
"The vamp had tied her wrists tied over her head to a beam, wire biting into the tender skin."
"The [vamp's] other arm pinned her left hand to her waist, locking her in place."
If her hands are tied over her head, how is the vamp pinning one to her waist? Once again, the author has lost her place.
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Sandy Frediani
is 61% done
Mary Jane throws a book at Dre, but her shoe lands back on the bed beside her. There's no mention of a shoe until it lands on the bed.
— Oct 28, 2017 02:55PM
Sandy Frediani
is 44% done
Okay. It evened out a little better since I made it to this point and it looks like I'll continue reading. That said.... A COTTONWOOD is a tree. A COTTONMOUTH is a snake. Big difference. Trees don't hiss.
— Oct 26, 2017 05:34PM
Sandy Frediani
is 23% done
I've never written a partial review before, but this time I feel the need to do so. At this point in the story there are so many glaring continuity errors, I'm not sure I want to continue. Rafer is wolf, the man, then wolf, then man and undressed and suddenly dressed. Lark is face down on the bed, then face up, then face down with no turning over. If the author can't keep track, neither can the reader.
— Oct 20, 2017 03:54PM
