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Nov 01, 2017 02:49PM
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This is...good. That's all. It feels either too long or two short -- the former because it could have accomplished the same goal in a simple short story, the latter because it could have been a truly stunning novel but feels thin & half-baked as a novella. As it is, this is a disappointing waste of tremendous potential. Maybe the author will expand or reduce it some day? Either fermenting or concentrating it?
Nov 01, 2017 04:31PM
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