J.L.’s Reviews > Winter's Guardian > Status Update
J.L.
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The story is good but it has several mistakes. Missing punctuation to repeated words.
Example - At 18% Freddy mentions getting hunted by a group of young vamps but at 39% she’s shocked to hear their are vampires.
— Nov 08, 2017 04:52PM
Example - At 18% Freddy mentions getting hunted by a group of young vamps but at 39% she’s shocked to hear their are vampires.
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