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Toya
is finished
It was a good book but need a little editing and help with continuity. At times it felt like the author didnt know whose voice she was usong or the ditection of the story. It seemed to end awkwardly.
— Nov 12, 2017 02:38PM
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Toya
is 66% done
So far this has been a good book. I did have to skip over the part about Abby drinking Aidan’s cum in a glass. I consider myself open-minded but that was a bit much for me.
— Nov 02, 2017 07:37PM
