Heather’s Reviews > Devil's Baby > Status Update

OMG THE CHEESE in this book?!?!? the person who wrote this obviously has no idea how a motorcycle club functions!!! apparently in this MC they tell everyone everything, the Club "Girls" & Old ladies hang out like one big family. They Have club meetings in the open. its just so bad. some of the lines the chick says during the sex scenes are weird. Its usually what a guy would say during sex but the chick is saying it.

This chick is a frigin Broken record I can't!!! So far the whole book she is saying over N over again that she cant trust him cause he is in a motorcycle club, meanwhile he does all these nice N sweet things 4 her when he doesnt have to!!! What Biker in a Motorcycle club says it's just a bike it can be replaced and decides to just leave his motorcycle at a restaurant parking lot ?!?!?!?!?!? NO BIKER would do that!!!!

Omg im only 9% done and i feel the this was writen by a high schooler . Its pretty imature for an MC book. I kinda want to punch the main charater chick in the face LOL