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Tattooed_mummy
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Still glued....got a bit weepy reading it in bed last night! Not sure I'm liking the way it's turned....
— Nov 14, 2017 11:23PM
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Tattooed_mummy
is on page 298 of 352
Surely here
"John's touching the white sheet. I can see the outline of a face, nose sticking out. Further down , shoulder blades before the sheet becomes thicker and turns into a thick shroud."
it should be collar bones not shoulder blades? your shoulder blades are on your back?? (sorry it's been bugging me since I reread it) The body is in a morgue so it would be on its back wouldn't it?
— Nov 15, 2017 04:32AM
"John's touching the white sheet. I can see the outline of a face, nose sticking out. Further down , shoulder blades before the sheet becomes thicker and turns into a thick shroud."
it should be collar bones not shoulder blades? your shoulder blades are on your back?? (sorry it's been bugging me since I reread it) The body is in a morgue so it would be on its back wouldn't it?
Tattooed_mummy
is on page 211 of 352
Page turner! Some discrepencies and bits of, imo, unnecessary repetition, but on the whole a really good read and a gripping story so far...
— Nov 14, 2017 05:42AM
