Devi’s Reviews > A Man of Some Repute > Status Update
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is 40% done
Hmm. So the hero's (I assume he's the hero) 13 year old sister is now basically breaking down his list of suspects? I get there might be a reason she needs to stay in the story. I get that she's precocious and mature for her age. But it's having the effect of making the hero look a bit dim. I guess I'll hang in there though and maybe he'll become clever later.
— Nov 18, 2017 02:30PM
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