Camille’s Reviews > The First Time in Forever > Status Update

(+) Maybe because it was so badly written, or maybe b/c Melody still doesn't have any more personality than a brick wall.

Skimmed through the last 18%, otherwise I would've never finished the utter trash that is this.

And it wasn't even written well, it was just a cheap shot at giving a dull character some background.

Using rape and abuse as a plot device::::; fuck you.

+ grammar mistakes.

Of course Melody has a perfect voice and let's just give her a job right now. Why not, right? She's already pretty and every guy she meets except the love interests already try to rape her. Let's just keep on adding to the ridiculousness that is this.

Thank all the Gods this is almost over.

Jesse pondered the words to the lullaby he knew. He was beginning to think he did love her.

They've known her for 3 days(+ or -, it's not like I'd pay any + attention to this book than what was needed) and already 1 of them is in love with her. Since none of them have any personality, we can just assume that by the book's ending everyone will be in love w/ everyone else just b/c.

"I really can't talk about this right now." she said, not ready to share anymore about her life. "Sure, for now," he said clearing his throat, "but we will have to talk about this at some point.

And I present(did I do this already? they all kind of blur together... I think I've been calling him love interest nº3) you Jesse, another useless love interest.

"What did they want?" asked Isaac softly. All four sets of eyes were aimed at her now.
She paused, collecting her thoughts as her face heated, "Me. They wanted me to... to..." Melody couldn't say words to what they wanted from her.

I guess this was supposed to make her seem traumatized or innocent, but it just didn't seem real. (+)