Naomi’s Reviews > Waterloo Sunset > Status Update
Naomi
is 21% done
I'm enjoying this, but it's a perfect caution against adding too many pop culture references into your novel. Up to half a dozen a page; we're bombarded with what songs Harry's listening to, what film characters people remind him of, etc.
— Dec 04, 2017 05:27AM
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Naomi
is 50% done
Not perfect by any stretch, but this has a really strong narrative - did the old "Just one more chapter" three times last night!
— Dec 04, 2017 03:52PM
