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Compared to other parts: ultra slow.
Captivity of Faile & Morgase, Manoeuvring around Caemlyn.
too many insignificant characters trouble the view of the reader.
Two lines of dialogue spreaded over three flaming pages (sorry Birgitte)
— Dec 11, 2017 05:15AM
Captivity of Faile & Morgase, Manoeuvring around Caemlyn.
too many insignificant characters trouble the view of the reader.
Two lines of dialogue spreaded over three flaming pages (sorry Birgitte)
