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Out of It - Very close to being a real story, but IMO it barely misses the mark. It's like half of an idea, in search of another half.
— Dec 09, 2017 01:11PM
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Melanti
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What Joseph Felt - The Christmas story from Joseph's point of view
— Dec 16, 2017 06:27PM
Melanti
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Tradition - Yawn. Heard the joke before. Telling it in a sci-fi setting does not make it worth hearing again.
— Dec 16, 2017 06:25PM
Melanti
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What Would Sam Spade Do? - Sci Fi Noir staring a clone of Jesus.... Weird.
— Dec 16, 2017 06:20PM
Melanti
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What a Piece of Work - Yeah. This one doesn't work either. And once gain, it's a sci-fi premise that falls flat on its face.
— Dec 09, 2017 01:22PM
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Turnover - Theoretically, this could make for an interesting story. But not for these motivations. It just doesn't make sense. I'm beginning to wonder if part of the issue is just that she doesn't know what makes good sci-fi either.
— Dec 09, 2017 01:01PM
Melanti
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Escape to Other Worlds with Science Fiction - A writing exercise set in the same world as her Small Change series, but has a bit of the feeling of her My Real Children. But both full length versions are so fantastic this just seems paltry in comparison.
— Dec 09, 2017 12:54PM

