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This should have another 50 pages in the last 30 pages. It jumped so quickly that it clearly felt like they ran out of time or material and rushed the end. I only noticed typos once I got to that section.

The ending "info dump" was unnecessary to me. Could have cut that page and half out and no difference.

I appreciate the murders and the classic rock scene flashbacks. Not enough to overrule the flaws.
Dec 21, 2017 01:49PM
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