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First impressions - It's written from the perspective of a member of the military by someone that I can only infer has never been in the military.
So - It's a bit "off". The interactions and the reactions of the "military" personnel are not correct. They do not act like pers that are in the military.
I'm reserving judgement for a bit though in the hope that this ceases once the guy is flying solo through space.
— Dec 24, 2017 03:30PM
So - It's a bit "off". The interactions and the reactions of the "military" personnel are not correct. They do not act like pers that are in the military.
I'm reserving judgement for a bit though in the hope that this ceases once the guy is flying solo through space.
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