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Katie is on page 55 of 412
So, I can already tell this book needs a little more editing - not much, but there are parts that could read a little tighter.

Xavier obviously isn't real - he's a ghost, a memory, a figment the protag uses to help himself function, something. But not real.

Creepy cop at the start is probably the serial killer. Or connected to him.
Dec 26, 2017 03:26PM
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Katie is on page 95 of 412
I am completely and utterly confused now on the timeline. But more certain than ever that Xavier doesn't exist like the protag thinks he does.
Dec 26, 2017 04:52PM
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