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Katie
is on page 183 of 370
Not sure why this one is so slow-going for me. I like the ideas but I think it needs to be a little tighter. Sometimes, the narration is redundant, explaining the dialogue even when tone and intent is already obvious. There are also some grammatical errors.
But on the whole, I am enjoying this.
— Jan 13, 2018 01:33PM
But on the whole, I am enjoying this.
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Katie
is on page 307 of 370
I must have a different edition, as my copy is 535 pages.
So much potential is bogged down by so much redundancy in the text. It makes me sad.
— Jan 18, 2018 03:38PM
So much potential is bogged down by so much redundancy in the text. It makes me sad.
