A. J’s Reviews > The Blue Moon Narthex > Status Update

all of the letter text is too small to read.

there's a crapton of names and people being introduced, I can't keep track of them all

soon it's a magic train?

I get that it's middle grade...but why does it have to be so cliche?

if there are train tracks under/in his house how has he never known this? trains aren't exactly silent.

world is vivid so far. but too many exclamation marks are being used.

I hate prologues.