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Patrick
is 30% done
Wtf, Mustang! Totally out of character, family is usually important to her and she is a genius... I hope that move makes some sense later... as for now, I'm not her fan any longer :O
— Jan 19, 2018 06:40PM
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Patrick
is 80% done
Weirdly glad t's almost over... sadly disappointed for several reasons, although it is most definitely a good book
— Jan 20, 2018 01:36PM
Patrick
is 60% done
Hate Ephraim... Holiday should have killed him, 10 years and everybody is going insane and/or spits on loyalty...
A republic like that with people like that isn't worth saving, best for Darrow to take his son and just move to some remote rock forever...
— Jan 20, 2018 04:41AM
A republic like that with people like that isn't worth saving, best for Darrow to take his son and just move to some remote rock forever...
Patrick
is 20% done
Love it and hate it,
4 equally split POVs is just too much in my opinion, focus should still have been on Darrow, and maybe 1 chapter for everybody else, or just 2 main POVs and 2 secondary ones.
Everytime it gets interesting you're switching to another person - soo tempted to just skip it all...
— Jan 19, 2018 03:18PM
4 equally split POVs is just too much in my opinion, focus should still have been on Darrow, and maybe 1 chapter for everybody else, or just 2 main POVs and 2 secondary ones.
Everytime it gets interesting you're switching to another person - soo tempted to just skip it all...
