Katherine’s Reviews > Forbidden: A Regency Box Set > Status Update
Katherine
is 53% done
I’m giving up on the third story - the language is too inconsistent. Mostly it’s very modern even though it’s set in 1799, but with odd inconsistencies like “did it not?” chucked in to make it sound plausibly old. Plus I get it - they did something bad, they betrayed you. Stop dropping pointless hints and just get on with telling the story.
Starting next story.
— Jan 25, 2018 08:39PM
Starting next story.
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Katherine
is 37% done
I enjoyed the first story. The second was so badly in need of proofreading that I gave up only a couple of chapters in. I mean, the heroine’s name in the first few pages was Elise/Essie and then it became Esther/Essie! Come on!
— Jan 25, 2018 08:38PM
