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This isn't good. only on page 2 and I'm noticing things that are wrong. Words capitalized that shouldn't be.
I don't consider someone saying "I've decided you're coming with me. It's you and me against the world. I can't survive without you," to be emotional blackmail.
— Jan 26, 2018 06:09PM
I don't consider someone saying "I've decided you're coming with me. It's you and me against the world. I can't survive without you," to be emotional blackmail.
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oh, come on! Things were looking better but there seems to be a few your/you're mix-ups still hanging around in this book.
— Jan 27, 2018 11:07AM
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Also, "when you are at the center of it, you can't see the wood for the trees."
The author screwed that saying up and it totally loses its meaning.
— Jan 26, 2018 06:11PM
The author screwed that saying up and it totally loses its meaning.
