Kyle Sullivan’s Reviews > Kage > Status Update
Kyle Sullivan
is on page 94 of 306
It's well-written and I like the character of Kage, even if he is stand-offish. But not much has happened yet, just lots of tease. While I agree with Rocky about antici-PATION, I'm about ready to slap sone sense into Jaime...
— Jan 27, 2018 08:15PM
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Kyle Sullivan
is on page 188 of 306
Finally the first steps to honesty. When you've got a guy like Kage sending you signals, you'd be a fool not to take him up on them...and Jamie keeps acting like a fool...like he's in high school instead of his third year of college. He's not very self-aware, even for a 21 year-old.
Still, the writing is good enough to keep me going, and so far I've only found one typo so that's excellent.
— Feb 02, 2018 09:14PM
Still, the writing is good enough to keep me going, and so far I've only found one typo so that's excellent.
Kyle Sullivan
is on page 143 of 306
Okay, Jamie is the densest twerp ever. That near 3-way would have screamed at me what was going on....but it's well-written enough to keep me hanging on hoping for a payoff.
— Jan 28, 2018 09:01PM
