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Charity is 47% done
Writing is very poor, overly simplistic.
Jan 27, 2018 10:54PM
The Terms: Part One (The Terms Duet Book 1)

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Charity is 8% done
Okay, the premise here is right up my alley, but there's no...spark, no...connection between the characters. The words on the page say there is, but it's just not there. This is a telling, not a showing.
Jan 27, 2018 07:06AM
The Terms: Part One (The Terms Duet Book 1)


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