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Elysian Fields
is 31% done
There is a little flow iuuse, and the characters change personalities quickly. It reads choppy. Not liking Red (or Phoenix, Nix, Dillon, whatever you want to call her).
— Feb 02, 2018 04:45PM
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Elysian Fields
is 23% done
Its good so far but I am not feeling the main characters connection. She is like a little child as everything is no, no, no. The author makes some interesting word choices; almost like she searched a thesaurus to change out more common words, some just don't work in the sentence.
— Feb 02, 2018 04:02PM
